CAMELOT FANTASIES
CAMELOT FANTASIES => Camelot Poetry Palace => Topic started by: wazimotometal on June 30, 2015, 09:16:46 pm
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Your heart and soul speaks volumes to many
Exquisite you are
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Too good
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SLEEP WALKS
Sleep walks...
on rain slick cobblestone streets
candle light flickers
from moistened window panes
neurotic images play on rewind
of bullets gone astray
and of empty words with nothing left to say
dreams consumed in eternal sleep
echo deafeningly across vacant landscapes
Sleep walks...
quiet and undisturbed
leering...smiling through every window it observes
so fragile are the children
restless from the haunts of daylight dreams
until they fade away
distorted ghostly forms
wander aimlessly down rain slick cobblestone streets
as Sleep stops to ponder
the restless minds and the games they play...
bells chime eerily from across the bay
and the rain's endless patter
twine together beneath this shade of grey
Sleep returns to its endless wander
its a journey that man cannot begin to ponder
down rain slick cobblestone streets
where candlelight flickers
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Queen Divine;
Humbled by your kindness about my work; so much was meant to be said inside of each piece..that I could have
rambled on and on. Too many memories, too many feelings... most would never know about me.
Your humbled protector;
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You're truly a gifted wordsmith and the depth of your heart and soul has poured benevolently to allow us the opportunity to see the heart and soul behind the Man we know as General Dan
You are multi faceted and that is fantastic that we can feel the rhythm of your heart beat and ply your words effortlessly with so much passion
Thank you
In awe and awaiting more
Love and light
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Too good
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Queen Divine;
Humbled by your kindness about my work; so much was meant to be said inside of each piece..that I could have
rambled on and on. Too many memories, too many feelings... most would never know about me.
Your humbled protector;
D
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General W
I feel the intensity of your pain to passions interwoven making us shudder from all emotions
Thanks for sharing and delving deep to your core to express with a deft hand and an open heart and soul
Love and light
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Ginger, thank you so much you're very kind. I'm glad that you liked them, just very vivid imagery. I will be posting more later on today. I did get some ice cream and I'm so bad, ate it all...lmao. I can't wait to see some of the images on your bar, that's so cool. Hope that you will have a great holiday weekend. .stay safe my friend.
Dan
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Wowza Dan, that is terrific! Keep up the great work. I think it is so awesome. I could never write something as great as that. Did you get some dark chocolate ice cream yet? Ha ha. I will have to post an image on my Bar & Grill. I've got some images to post, but so much going on the last few days. Please feel free to call me Ginger on here, but not on Twitter. I removed my name from there, due to some very bad unwanted attention. I hope you have a great evening. Blessings, Ginger.
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Thank you my honored friend, just feels right sharing here in Camelot, so many things to do and share..great community.
Dan
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Thank you my friends, the idea for this cut was part of my concept album about how our minds see our lives as images or sequences of events, Sleep is alive here. The idea hit me, so I wrote 3 sections of 5 sings each, evolving through each piece..., I'm honored and will share more later..
Dan
awesome.
glad you are sharing this with us and the world.
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Sulfurous aerosols penetrating my pores;
battered,...my shell is aflame
distant moans fill the air
voices....lips split in despair
shadows dance and twist perverse
eyeless entities
lost in hypnotic verse
shattered
I'm chained....obscene
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Shattered pieces are all I am;
burning tears come pouring down
a sin amongst the shadows
it's all I am....
a corridor of secrets
playing on rewind,
and tears come pouring down
across skin so cold;
another painful nightmare
taking hold....demonized
and so the story is told...
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I can taste her
across full subtle lips...for all eternity
ebony hair and mocha colored eyes
she is my one desire
the only lust...here so deep inside
intertwined in the pouring rain
sharing secrets of a lifetime
flames beyond desire...so hard to hide
she's my eternity
unbreakable,
this lust that's killing me. ..
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There's an emptiness
locked away in the corridors of my mind
shackled....bound so cold
lightning shatters the darkness
a synaptic response...
they're in the darkness
the answers reaching out for me
adrift on an empty sea;...
at last I am...a soulless entity
and now I'm alone!
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Divine, I'm honored that you post on my page and how you feel about my work. The artwork you provide is welcome, any of our friends are always welcome, so please don't remove anything...hopefully you're having a great day my friend.
Dan
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Thank you my friends, the idea for this cut was part of my concept album about how our minds see our lives as images or sequences of events, Sleep is alive here. The idea hit me, so I wrote 3 sections of 5 sings each, evolving through each piece..., I'm honored and will share more later..
Dan
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Dark Genesis awesome loving it! Thanks for sharing
She kinda fits here
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wow.
awesome. keep it going.
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Reality avoidance,
seeking supernatural transcendence
gears squeal into motion
tendons twitch beneath the skin
whispered words.....I remember them,
Sleep stands silently...waiting
with loving eyes she watches me
awaiting my transition
a metamorphosis
from man to machine
and so the end begins...
I am reborn!