CAMELOT FANTASIES

Quote from: Divine Metamorphoses on November 04, 2017, 09:07:11 pm

I’m impressed Lady Olga!
Constructive criticism is good, trusting your
Instincts is top notch.
Because when all is said and done
It’s YOUR VISION!

We are supportive of you too!

I will look more closely on Monday.
Thank you!
~Divine xo

Haha agree, even writers don't like it at all. Haha But this is how we can improve our writing, right? Writers shouldn't think that what they did is the best and they haven't any targets to be better for now. This is utopia, I suppose. Writers must change day by day cause this is the practice and work and must to reach the highest top if I can say so in English. Because some people can totally enjoy my or another author's writing, some can tell like, this is bad, crap, really boring and etc. People can say that an author really is awful or other offensive and not pleasant words. This is hurting, I know, but I really hope people will see the part of me in my debut book. It was hard to write, it was a really emotional thing because all scenes that I experienced with heroes, it was like I was and Veronica, and Milano. They were becoming me as I was as they are. It was a really huge trial for me.

I started to write FATEFUL ITALIAN PASSION (FIP) since the 2013 year and still does. I rewrite some volumes because of own opinions and this really makes me so tired. Of course, I am stressed because of this double work, but I cannot write like a beginning writer. I must increase my level of writing. At that time when I started to write FIP SERIES, I was not as good as other authors, I can admit it, but when time passed, I began to understand what means good writing and how better to express emotions in English. Of course, this is a hard path, but I am really stubborn for just stop and not to do anything.

Some people make writers feel sad, I think in vain. Maybe because they cannot write as good as they are, and want to criticize an author as much as they can, even not accepting their skills in a language, the plot, of course, is important, but also to express own emotions is not so easy. And yes, ideal author's writing for anyone is special but I hope people will learn how to be more compassionate. For example, the best writing that caught my attention recently was Pepper Winters's books. How she uses the words, how she keeps readers in tension, this is the high limit of perfection for me. I read some not good reviews from other authors about her and was really upset because she is a really talented and doesn't deserve such critic. Anyway, I also understand that we cannot judge others for their tastes but sometimes people just jealous.

My dream to write closer to her super professional using-words writing and all-time test different things in my own upcoming books. And true, everyone has own pov and I cannot point to someone that he is wrong if he doesn't like it. But since I read a lot of Romance and Dark Romance literature, such style of writing and using a thesaurus as Pepper Winter does - not anyone can do. It is outstanding really! Especially for myself, which the English language is not a mother language.

Hope my section lecture wasn't so boring. See you later. 

Lady Olga

First and foremost, thank you very much for your point of view.
Lucrative and powerful. Your Mother language is not English, I am
Impressed with your fluidity of thought in the English language.
Impressive.

Here is a fact: all artists are sensitive and insecure

All artists
All creatives

Some people will view as a masterpiece
Others may not.

That’s the beauty of choices.

I’m working on my first books.
I’ve worked on my published play.
Co wrote scripts.

Although the writing style is different.
We are telling a story.
Suspense and keeping the story interesting is by far
The main focus.

Tension between characters is a finite line.
Capturing our heart to snare the readers hearts.

Impressed: you feel the characters.
Then we feel them.
Drawn into the romantic interlude, or the dramatic tension that
Envelopes them.

Please share the Canadian Amazon link and I will
Purchase your book.

I have many to read in the next while.

Purchased 40 and haven’t been able to enrich my reading of late.

Congratulations on your creative endeavours.

Thank you for enlightening and sharing.
Much love and light!

~Divine