Victoria Center

#1 Reply
Posted by pryzmsticv on 01 Sep, 2015 01:28
Breathless is the Heart, the Souls Reprieve. Mega times, ov Luvs' stays. Painful are Their Days, Depth Within the Soul. Luving to Appease,My Heart Waits. Passion to Seize, Destiny in Play. Loneliness, Please Walk Away. Memories are Here to Stay, They Keep My Luv, for You Sane. Breathless I say, Luv is Not Vain.

#2 Reply
Posted by JFoshia on 01 Sep, 2015 02:21
That was beautiful, lady V! Keeping the good memories while ridding your mind and soul of the bad. I love it

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Posted by pryzmsticv on 03 Sep, 2015 23:39
Thank you very much lady j, I'm glad you understood, sometimes I think does any one know what I mean cause sometimes I raddle on. It means a lot to me what you think, thank you so much my dear friend.

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Posted by pryzmsticv on 04 Sep, 2015 00:10
Hunting My Lifes Fame, Loneliness is Not to Blame. Cursed Many Years Ago, People DO Not Know, ov the Truth that We hold. Beautiful I Feel, ov the Moments that I Reel. With Crimson Tastes to Fulfill, I Confess I Miss The Human Feel. To Turn Someone, Would not be Kind. Luv is Not Blind. Would He Want, to Taste or Feel, What is so Surreal. I Think Not, He Has a Soul. I Feel, I Hurt, I Want to be kind. To Remind, I Have no Soul , No Limitations to My Control, but I Think i Do Have a Soul. I want to Turn Him, I Would Luv Sinking My Teeth into His Skin, to Drain Him Dry, Would be my Sin. I am Madly in Luv with Him. Serenity I Do Cry, Luving is My Crime. Crimson Tears to Die. Loneliness I Cry.

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Posted by EquineAnn on 04 Sep, 2015 15:57
I always understand your beautiful poetic conversation too but I find myself mentally putting them into verses & correcting spelling mistakes. Please don't get offended by the 2nd part of this as it's 2nd nature to me. I find myself doing this when I read books, magazines & newspapers too. Everyone who knows me say I should be a proof-reader but I wouldn't know how to get a job like that. It sounds great though reading books for a living & correcting mistakes. I'd be in heaven.

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Posted by EquineAnn on 04 Sep, 2015 17:19
Oh dear! I was trying to make you feel better about yourself Victoria & then I put my big size 8's into things.

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Posted by pryzmsticv on 09 Sep, 2015 16:52
Your ok lady Anne, no size 8s my dear in your mouth. Some times my mind flows faster, then my fingers do. Thus the mistakes my friend.Always good to be critiqued my dear. Thank you again.

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Posted by pryzmsticv on 09 Sep, 2015 18:40
I had something I was working on , lost it. I'll get it back again. I'll do it on my computer, that way it wont get lost. I have it on paper .

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Posted by EquineAnn on 10 Sep, 2015 06:50
I know. I have the same problem at times. I can't help the way my mind works though. Lol. It's o.k.

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Posted by pryzmsticv on 11 Sep, 2015 16:52
My Mind Controls My Heart, to Participate in Luvs Date. Only to Find, Control is Destiny's to Designate. Time does
Depart, from Luvers Devotion, to Control its Fate. How Luv Responds, to Compensate with Loneliness with Minds Debate ov Ones Soul. Luv has Lost Control, over Fate. Luvs Debate.

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Posted by EquineAnn on 12 Sep, 2015 14:29
I know how you feel at times Lady Victoria. Your mind works 10 times faster than the rest of your body can keep up with. You forget by the time you get the chance to put it down so either come up with nothing at all or something completely different or have to wait for the same ideas to come back to you.

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Posted by pryzmsticv on 20 Sep, 2015 02:07
If time could only tell, everything with a spell. Loneliness, need not confess. Everyone goes through its hell, as part ov their design. Embracing everything, with sweet finesse. Getting you happiness, at a different time. Never give up control to the desperate soul. Embracing the feelings & the pain, bring them out to fight again. Living and luving you life again, with control ov a beautiful soul. The spell ov time again.

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Posted by pryzmsticv on 22 Sep, 2015 23:09
Dark is my soul, yearning to gain control. Pleasantly night descends, shadows creep on in. Memories of my mind, want to turn to dust again. Should I be so kind, and let it apprehend my mind. I'm confused with Destiny's design. Fate ov mystery, is usually what commands. Desires to take control, ov my soul again. Chasing through history aggressive as I can,wanting to coincide with the lifes that I've had. Should I combine, the memories ov Being what truly am. A vampire hard to appease. Cravings with expertise ov a luving hand, & compelling eye to see. What you mean to me. Should I Just let you stake me, and set me free, ov all this disease. Shadows to creep on in, ill commit my ultimate sin, to Turn Him. Dark my soul.

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Posted by EquineAnn on 23 Sep, 2015 01:25
I can understand how you feel at times. I can feel the same way. I like how you've changed it into a horror poem though I'm not a horror fan. It's too scary for me.