DIVINE METAMORPHOSES POETRY

• #105 Reply
  Posted by Exotic One on 06 Mar, 2015 20:37
• Ok thank u
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• #106 Reply
  Posted by Divine Metamorphoses on 06 Mar, 2015 21:36
• His strength welcomes her softness
  Her soft supple Breasts to
  His hard muscled chest
  He caresses her face with love
  With featherlight touches
  Soft as a glove
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• #107 Reply
  Posted by thetruth on 07 Mar, 2015 15:28
• Quote from: Divine Metamorphoses on 06 Mar, 2015 14:42

  The eyes are blind when the mind can't see
  Thoughts surround become blurry deceive
  There is no clarity
  Circumvolve the images
  Twist and turn
  Ignite the fire let it burn
  Darkness strewn through visages of light
  Illumination discovered to recover the bright
  Variorum edition complex in my brain matter
  Abyss like blackness elucidate explanations shatter
  Radiant energy touch my soul
  Lighten my load
  Perspicacity is an illusion
  Or so I've been told
  

  
  The eyes are blind when the mind can't see
  Thoughts surround become blurry deceive
  There is no clarity
  
  This is so good, and so true.
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• #108 Reply
  Posted by Divine Metamorphoses on 08 Mar, 2015 03:11
• Additional
  F.E.A.R
  False
  Evidence
  Appearing
  Real
  
  Many times we need to name it to claim it and then Let It Go
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• #109 Reply
  Posted by sdru1971vt on 10 Mar, 2015 13:29
• I really like this. Very good.
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• #110 Reply
  Posted by Divine Metamorphoses on 10 Mar, 2015 17:08
• Does my back hurt your knife
  Feel the intense excruciating pain travel to the hilt
  Fabricating this cruelly intended strife
  Magniloquent false expressions were built
  Darkness descends
  Lightness ascends
  This is the End
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• #111 Reply
  Posted by thetruth on 10 Mar, 2015 21:48
• Quote from: Divine Metamorphoses on 10 Mar, 2015 17:08

  Does my back hurt your knife
  Feel the intense excruciating pain travel to the hilt
  Fabricating this cruelly intended strife
  Magniloquent false expressions were built
  Darkness descends
  Lightness ascends
  This is the End
  

  
  Wow. Just wow.
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• #112 Reply
  Posted by thetruth on 10 Mar, 2015 21:49
• Quote from: Divine Metamorphoses on 08 Mar, 2015 03:11

  Additional
  F.E.A.R
  False
  Evidence
  Appearing
  Real
  
  Many times we need to name it to claim it and then Let It Go
  

  
  Lovely quote and so true.
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• #113 Reply
  Posted by Clay Death on 11 Mar, 2015 20:19
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• #114 Reply
  Posted by Divine Metamorphoses on 13 Mar, 2015 03:40
• Every Day
  Every Way
  Distance
  Yearning for your presence
  This isn't an existence
  Desires
  Requires
  Change
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• #115 Reply
  Posted by Exotic One on 13 Mar, 2015 10:43
• Nice
  
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• #116 Reply
  Posted by thetruth on 13 Mar, 2015 18:17
• Quote from: Divine Metamorphoses on 10 Mar, 2015 22:13

  Lady TT you're a gracious loving lady & I'm blessed!
  You have been an incredible support system to all of us newbies here at Camelot! Between you & General CD you make us want to soar higher in our creativity
  Blessings always
  

  
  Aw thanks.
  
  The weird thing is that I'm not usually into poetry. In the past I tried my hand at it, on a very low level. For instance, I couldn't think poetry without rhyming, so I gave it up.
  
  Occasionally I read it, but it's usually over my head. Sometimes the word require so much imagery that I get bored, and the words sometimes make me lose the meaning of the poems.
  
  But the poetry that you all are submitting I understand. I don't have to strain my brain to comprehend what you all are saying.
  
  I think because you all are going to the core of whatever it is that you're talking about and describing in a way that the heart understands. Everyone cannot do this.
  
  When I read all of the newbies I'm amazed at he level of talent. The purpose is clear and it immediately connects. I'm the one to thank you all, because you've re-awakened something that has lain dormant for many years.
  
  Now, that doesn't mean that I'm going to try to reawaken urge. I would be too embarrassed to try seeing as how gifted you all are.
  
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• #117 Reply
  Posted by Clay Death on 13 Mar, 2015 23:33
• hey folks check out this neat little poem I just came across:
  
  
  My Rose
  
  
  
   I want this to last
   Grow
   Like a rose
   Bloom
   And never die
   I want it to keep its color
   Pressed between well read pages
   Saved forever
   Brilliance never seeping away
   Perfume never fading
   Never losing any part
   Of what it is now
   I want this to last...
   Forever
  
   - Tess Stoops -
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• #118 Reply
  Posted by Clay Death on 14 Mar, 2015 00:34
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• #119 Reply
  Posted by Clay Death on 14 Mar, 2015 08:59
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