hey folks check out this neat little poem I just came across:
My Rose
I want this to last
Grow
Like a rose
Bloom
And never die
I want it to keep its color
Pressed between well read pages
Saved forever
Brilliance never seeping away
Perfume never fading
Never losing any part
Of what it is now
I want this to last...
Forever
- Tess Stoops -
Ooh, that's nice.. What a way to remember a memory.
Lady TT you're a gracious loving lady & I'm blessed!
You have been an incredible support system to all of us newbies here at Camelot! Between you & General CD you make us want to soar higher in our creativity
Blessings always
Aw thanks.
The weird thing is that I'm not usually into poetry. In the past I tried my hand at it, on a very low level. For instance, I couldn't think poetry without rhyming, so I gave it up.
Occasionally I read it, but it's usually over my head. Sometimes the word require so much imagery that I get bored, and the words sometimes make me lose the meaning of the poems.
But the poetry that you all are submitting I understand. I don't have to strain my brain to comprehend what you all are saying.
I think because you all are going to the core of whatever it is that you're talking about and describing in a way that the heart understands. Everyone cannot do this.
When I read all of the newbies I'm amazed at he level of talent. The purpose is clear and it immediately connects. I'm the one to thank you all, because you've re-awakened something that has lain dormant for many years.
Now, that doesn't mean that I'm going to try to reawaken urge. I would be too embarrassed to try seeing as how gifted you all are.
Lady TT graciously kind and glorious soul! My heart tells me that you have the ability as we all ( newbies) do! Leap of faith!
As with everything when we let it flow it's amazing.
Looking forward for you are an eloquent ink scribbler as you express yourself throughout this forum.
Grateful
Blessings
Thank you for your kind words, but there's no way. As I read you all's poetry I can't even think about writing a poem. First, it's what you want to describe, just amazing. I think I'll read for a year or so, before attempting anything, LOL.
hey folks check out this neat little poem I just came across:
My Rose
I want this to last
Grow
Like a rose
Bloom
And never die
I want it to keep its color
Pressed between well read pages
Saved forever
Brilliance never seeping away
Perfume never fading
Never losing any part
Of what it is now
I want this to last...
Forever
- Tess Stoops -
Ooh, that's nice.. What a way to remember a memory.
Indeed, this is lovely, just how I wish all connections could be!
Lady TT you're a gracious loving lady & I'm blessed!
You have been an incredible support system to all of us newbies here at Camelot! Between you & General CD you make us want to soar higher in our creativity
Blessings always
Aw thanks.
The weird thing is that I'm not usually into poetry. In the past I tried my hand at it, on a very low level. For instance, I couldn't think poetry without rhyming, so I gave it up.
Occasionally I read it, but it's usually over my head. Sometimes the word require so much imagery that I get bored, and the words sometimes make me lose the meaning of the poems.
But the poetry that you all are submitting I understand. I don't have to strain my brain to comprehend what you all are saying.
I think because you all are going to the core of whatever it is that you're talking about and describing in a way that the heart understands. Everyone cannot do this.
When I read all of the newbies I'm amazed at he level of talent. The purpose is clear and it immediately connects. I'm the one to thank you all, because you've re-awakened something that has lain dormant for many years.
Now, that doesn't mean that I'm going to try to reawaken urge. I would be too embarrassed to try seeing as how gifted you all are.
Lady TT graciously kind and glorious soul! My heart tells me that you have the ability as we all ( newbies) do! Leap of faith!
As with everything when we let it flow it's amazing.
Looking forward for you are an eloquent ink scribbler as you express yourself throughout this forum.
Grateful
Blessings
Thank you for your kind words, but there's no way. As I read you all's poetry I can't even think about writing a poem. First, it's what you want to describe, just amazing. I think I'll read for a year or so, before attempting anything, LOL.
Dear Ladies TT and Divine,
You are both gracious and generous and without Lady Divine's kind invitation I would not be here in Camelot. As for Words, I find myself a stumbling beginner, fumbling for expression but then perhaps we all feel that way at times. I suspect, Lady TT that your Words will always be what you need them to be, and because they are from You and shared with others from the heart, they will always be perfect!
this is an amazing thread.
fascinating and inspiring.
You prefer the Drug to my Love
**** excited the brain
My eyes beseech you to open up be true
You look around escaping me look above
All the passion is gone I feel blue
There is no competition
You have chosen your preference
I won't follow you to perdition
I'm not a part of the equation
You've portayed deference
The blame game is getting old
You love me today tomorrow I'm told
I've lied to myself for way too long
I need a love, desire, passion
Where I belong
Not to the Drug, the need
I'm gone forever
Stop the Bleed
You prefer the Drug to my Love
**** excited the brain
My eyes beseech you to open up be true
You look around escaping me look above
All the passion is gone I feel blue
There is no competition
You have chosen your preference
I won't follow you to perdition
I'm not a part of the equation
You've portayed deference
The blame game is getting old
You love me today tomorrow I'm told
I've lied to myself for way too long
I need a love, desire, passion
Where I belong
Not to the Drug, the need
I'm gone forever
Stop the Bleed
amazing compositions/prose.
thanks for sharing your amazing poetry with your Camelot family and also the world.
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