Author Topic: Victoria's Poetry Stop (Read 55752 times)

pryzmsticv · « **Reply #15 on:** January 28, 2016, 05:01:34 am »

PAINLESS HEART

My heart stripped away, all my feelings today.
Darkness sits mundane, with crescents ov pain.
Beautiful my dark, why does it push me away!
I hail it to come and play, but it ignores my glowing rays.
Distant is not the pain, in my soul it remains.
Will it always be this way, I know I need to feel it's reign.
Part of my abyss, is it's loneliness.
Caressing my soul, its timeless memories.
Life, will never be same.

EquineAnn · « **Reply #16 on:** January 28, 2016, 07:06:26 am »

I think that's very good.

pryzmsticv · « **Reply #17 on:** January 28, 2016, 08:39:26 pm »

Thank you my dear lady. What a beautiful friend you are my dear.

Divine Metamorphoses · « **Reply #18 on:** January 29, 2016, 02:52:10 am »

Quote from: pryzmsticv on January 28, 2016, 04:20:13 am

Thank you Devine, such as your prose, that I do read. Beautiful, they do appease. With light or dark, they glow from within your heart. Thank you my dear.😚

Thank you Lady Victoria
You make that soul connection with the flow of your prose

It's the heart speaking
Our hearts are listening

Divine

EquineAnn · « **Reply #19 on:** January 29, 2016, 03:39:45 am »

You're welcome, Lady Victoria. Thank you very much.

Clay Death · « **Reply #20 on:** January 31, 2016, 10:42:17 pm »

BirdOfPrey · « **Reply #21 on:** February 11, 2016, 05:01:51 pm »

Normal style or not thats great Victoria ! Love it!

pryzmsticv · « **Reply #22 on:** February 12, 2016, 05:12:09 am »

MIRRORS

Mirrors ov my mind, sometimes turns silently.
Quickens my heartbeats, in the flash ov a light.
Memories humble me, in blinding to see.
Distance, wont free me.
In the mirrors, ov my mind.
I see, your luv ov me.
Your craving, ov similarities.
Holding me, within your arms.
Luving me, with your soothing charms.
Distant our luv is yours to see, but not for eternity.
Mirrors ov my mind, sometimes silences me.
Revoking our luv, that will be.

pryzmsticv · « **Reply #23 on:** February 12, 2016, 05:36:41 am »

ABUSE OV LUV.
(DEDICATED FOR A FRIEND, WHO ALMOST GOT HER HEAD BASHED IN)

You still rise, a victim of his lies.
A commentary applause, to his laws.
Loneliness prevails, with the dictator jailed.
Strength details, no surprise.
You are the one despised, only because ov his lies.
Still you rise, holding on to him reverently.
Hanging on with your luv, defensively you rise above.
Speechless you hold in, the luving memories, ov you & him.
Venting freely, youll never be able to do.
All ov this, because he says he luvs you.
Many times I saw you, with the bruises ov his luv.
With the hues of purple & blue, all because you stood true.
Still you rise, he's your hell in disguise.
With hope, you still rise

EquineAnn · « **Reply #24 on:** February 12, 2016, 07:19:01 am »

Is your friend o.k.? That's a very good poem. I can understand how you must feel.

EquineAnn · « **Reply #25 on:** February 12, 2016, 07:19:59 am »

I like your other poem too.

Divine Metamorphoses · « **Reply #26 on:** February 13, 2016, 12:27:14 am »

Lady Victoria

I can feel the intensity of emotions that are tearing my heart for the pain felt and seen.

Love has many different definitions at different stages.

Thank you for showing us the anguish that exists in this life

Much love and light
Divine

pryzmsticv · « **Reply #27 on:** February 16, 2016, 12:27:30 am »

Quote from: BirdOfPrey on February 11, 2016, 05:01:51 pm

Normal style or not thats great Victoria ! Love it!

Thank you Sir Bird ov Prey, I have many different ways. Just depends on that day, and if my mind is here to stay or if its gone away.😚 I must inform you I luv your AVI reminds me of lion gates & greatness ov their movies.

pryzmsticv · « **Reply #28 on:** February 16, 2016, 12:37:02 am »

Quote from: EquineAnn on February 12, 2016, 07:19:01 am

Is your friend o.k.? That's a very good poem. I can understand how you must feel.

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Thank you lady Ann, yes my friend is now good, she finally took a stand. She got the hell out of there, and got help mentally too. For you see, she had been thru a few relationships ov the same, but with time increasing adverse. She is my sister. So many times I would have killed him myself, I called the police the last time. Thank you so much for your concern. Luv you my dear😚

pryzmsticv · « **Reply #29 on:** February 16, 2016, 12:44:11 am »

Quote from: Divine Metamorphoses on February 13, 2016, 12:27:14 am

Lady Victoria

I can feel the intensity of emotions that are tearing my heart for the pain felt and seen.

Love has many different definitions at different stages.

Thank you for showing us the anguish that exists in this life

Much love and light
Divine

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Thank you lady D, it was and had been in my heart & my head. She could have so many times, given her life. She is not just a friend but my sister. So from the heart it did wrestle with me. Thank you my dear for the beauty of your words. Luv you😚 my dear

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