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My Life of Poems .......
« on: September 03, 2015, 12:29:47 pm »
I love to write, I've written poems for years, and I've been told I should write country songs about my life. LoL!  I date my poems so I can sift through the many files in my brain and find the memory that went with the poem. Sometimes they make me smile, and sometimes they make me cry. Regardless, it was my life and it's made me the woman that I am today.  I hope you enjoy them.

P.S.  I'm a dreamer and a hopeless romantic. 

My Heart……..

What happened to my heart, the one I called my own
I gave it to you to keep to cherish and to keep it warm

My heart can truly love you and bring a smile upon your face
You never will feel lonely; my heart will fill that space

But if my hearts a burden please do not despair
Wrap it up and send it back with tender loving Care

My heart will still be happy for it has known real love
It's better to have loved and lost then to have
never felt true love.

Written by: Melissa Young
2/23/10

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« Reply #1 on: September 03, 2015, 01:16:29 pm »
I think that's very good.

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« Reply #2 on: September 03, 2015, 01:59:56 pm »
Thank you for the vote of confidence.  :)

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« Reply #3 on: September 03, 2015, 03:00:18 pm »
It's o.k. I say exactly what I think & I know good poetry when I see it. I've also written poetry on & off since I was a child. I write songs too though. 1 of my other hobbies is singing.

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« Reply #4 on: September 03, 2015, 03:09:00 pm »
 :) I sing everything, but do I sound good? Not really LOL!  If I could only remember important things as well as I remember lyrics.  :)

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« Reply #5 on: September 03, 2015, 06:37:27 pm »
Haha! I've got a singsong voice when speaking as well as listening & sound as good acapella as I do accompanied which is very good as I can't play an instrument because I never got a chance to learn as I always had to sing & song-write in music class & join choir. People forget things when they're stressed sometimes. :0)

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« Reply #6 on: September 03, 2015, 07:59:57 pm »
Very beautiful prose, a romantic  you are. your right it could become a song. Dont every give my friend  you've the talent, so persevere.

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« Reply #7 on: September 08, 2015, 08:10:44 am »
Thank you very much.

 

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