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Re: Lady of the Lake By Divine Metamorphoses
« Reply #30 on: April 15, 2015, 11:32:15 pm »

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Re: Lady of the Lake By Divine Metamorphoses
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Re: Lady of the Lake By Divine Metamorphoses
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Re: Lady of the Lake By Divine Metamorphoses
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Re: Lady of the Lake By Divine Metamorphoses
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Re: Lady of the Lake By Divine Metamorphoses
« Reply #35 on: April 17, 2015, 04:03:07 pm »


This is a really nice castle. It looks stately with a modern twist.

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Re: Lady of the Lake By Divine Metamorphoses
« Reply #36 on: April 18, 2015, 12:37:23 am »
This lady at the lake so fine and fair  I must meet her or

Do I dare

There is something about her so magicle and divine   There is so thing about
her that is true and kind. 

She is fairer then ten thousand angles all dressed in white
Yet she has a way that captures my attention like nothing ever has before
this night

She's wearing green like the forrest covering
making my eyes water from pleasures above hovering
Wait!!! What's that? Did she just speak ? My ears have heard nothing before
With sounds of heavenly angels so sweet.  My God is this true is this vision
Of perfection the one you created to give me direction. Look at her hair so long
And silky with skin flawless and colored so milky. She looked at me I stop dead
In my tracks  wishing we were together holding nothing back. This lady at the lake
Is she real or a dream I want to touch her she's real it seams. Beauty is her name
Perfection and untamed. Please lady at the lake my I dance with you
Under the stars in the this field of grass remove  me from my prison bars

Yes she comes to me now singing with perfect pitch her body is perfect as she
Sways to the wind making my heart melt I can't let this end. 

Lady of the lake let me take you right now i can't wait any longer on
My knees I do bow.  I take your hand and kiss your wrist you kiss my face
And then my lips.   My heart beats fast for the lady at the lake
She invites me to take a bite of her cake.  Sweet as the morning dew as I dreamed
It would be as this lady at the lake I have fallen for thee

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Re: Lady of the Lake By Divine Metamorphoses
« Reply #37 on: April 18, 2015, 04:41:00 am »
This lady at the lake so fine and fair  I must meet her or

Do I dare

There is something about her so magicle and divine   There is so thing about
her that is true and kind. 

She is fairer then ten thousand angles all dressed in white
Yet she has a way that captures my attention like nothing ever has before
this night

She's wearing green like the forrest covering
making my eyes water from pleasures above hovering
Wait!!! What's that? Did she just speak ? My ears have heard nothing before
With sounds of heavenly angels so sweet.  My God is this true is this vision
Of perfection the one you created to give me direction. Look at her hair so long
And silky with skin flawless and colored so milky. She looked at me I stop dead
In my tracks  wishing we were together holding nothing back. This lady at the lake
Is she real or a dream I want to touch her she's real it seams. Beauty is her name
Perfection and untamed. Please lady at the lake my I dance with you
Under the stars in the this field of grass remove  me from my prison bars

Yes she comes to me now singing with perfect pitch her body is perfect as she
Sways to the wind making my heart melt I can't let this end. 

Lady of the lake let me take you right now i can't wait any longer on
My knees I do bow.  I take your hand and kiss your wrist you kiss my face
And then my lips.   My heart beats fast for the lady at the lake
She invites me to take a bite of her cake.  Sweet as the morning dew as I dreamed
It would be as this lady at the lake I have fallen for thee

Great poem.

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Re: Lady of the Lake By Divine Metamorphoses
« Reply #38 on: April 19, 2015, 12:59:22 am »
Good

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Re: Lady of the Lake By Divine Metamorphoses
« Reply #39 on: April 19, 2015, 02:37:15 am »


I always knew this day would eventually come
They day  I'd want to say these words to you
It's with these words held in my heart
 I now feel I need to renew
Thinking about what I want to say
 waiting for when the time was right
Saying exactly what's on my mind
While in my mind you're sitting here with me tonight

I get caught up in my own little world
At times I tend to forget
The true essence  of those little words
Which entered  the day we first met
If you would move just a little bit closer
I can describe the moment when this all began
When I knew you'd be my special lady
The lady at the lake

It was an evening like no other a time I held you close
we listened to the falling rain
Sitting beside a warm flickering fire
Sharing dreams with a glass of champagne
I never could have imagined
I'd be spending an evening like that with you
we talked between the falling raindrops
expressing points of view

my arms wrapped tightly around you
I thought about how hard it would be to let you go
Then suddenly you turned around and kissed me
then at that moment did I really know
Falling in love on that special night with the lady at the lake
I couldn't find the words to say
you were the only one in my life for sure
Who has ever made me feel this way
I looked deep into your eyes
then I took you by the  hand
I knew that all I ever needed
Was to love to hold you all that I can
You became a part of my little world lady at the lake
Knowing  I could never let you go
 Loving you meant so much to me
More than you could possibly ever know lady at the lake
I need to say how much I  care
Your the only one I ever wished for
Was that you would always be there
You will always be my special lady at the lake
loving you so tenderly
I'd be lost in my little world if it not be for you
To share this love and your touch lady at the lake

you by my side  a fire to keep us warm
always welcome the falling rain
 holding each other and never letting go
falling in love all over again with my lady by the lake

The words I say still mean the same
After all this time with you
the best part of all was knowing
That my very special lady by the lake still loves me to this day

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Re: Lady of the Lake By Divine Metamorphoses
« Reply #40 on: April 19, 2015, 04:26:33 am »
Lady of the Lake

Poised warriors give dawn's early morning dew anticipation of something more to come
Drawing breath as lightly as quietly as drawing blade and bow
Steely gazed on quarry far off into the distance

Another quiet breath offers words for her brothers and sisters in blessing
Frosty utterances from demure lips giving quiet elocutions
breath to prayers at the edge of God's lake the lady receives no words in reply
but a vision
she sees a blade made bluish green in hue before her mind's eye
Why?!
She asks in her mind's eye
Why?!
why does this have to happen, why does this war have to occur?

They leap from their pitted post and ruffle the dew free from its contemplation
Treading further and further to the goal silently as fawn
All training and execution running with them up to this day
but what would be their reward but blood
leaping and Yelling visceral cries at their striking distance guards and soldiers falling all at once
they had been rewarded in so much blood already
it was all in their training now to live or to die
and thus they live

The Lady brings her father report from the lake
God's Lake
she tells him with tears streaming from her eyes she saw a sword with lattice streaming down its inward spine
that this sword would bring them to victory
Her father the blacksmith saw more her eyes than the lattice he would create, but he would create it all the same

Two weeks later, lo, the black flag rises with an orange dawn
skulls and death are what it portends
it is the Christian's ancient enemy
Rome
A few stationed forces had finally given way to 10,000 Legionnaires
And this entire kingdom would be RAZED

Death and fire ravaged the village
Burned death no respite smoked and choked all things up to the edge of a lake
God's Lake
Then the last fawn of the village lept into the lake tightly gripping something wrapped in her arms
A blue glowing sword held by the lady chased by Centurions she throwing the sword and letting her light body be pulled deeper and deeper
the frigid water embracing her giving her the last love she would see in this world
all she remembered was the words passed between her and him, the boy
and finally she becomes a weight with the blade and closes her eyes and forgets everything

The Boy
Now blood soaked and turning into a man
running back to the village he was raised in
Picking up his blade again facing tyrants another day
Now it had all come back to haunt him
But he remembered the words between them
the words she left him before all the battles
And he ran
He ran to be by her side he ran through the smoke and the embers
he ran through the death and the horror
he ran to the Lake
God's Lake
And he ran and only found two centurions straining their cloaks of water
Young rage he meted upon them blade upon blood-soaked bone one strike after another down down down
And the last words of the dying centurion, "she is The Lady in the Lake"
And he pointed and he spit his last blood and breath

Below, deep, where they had played for years as children at the bottom of the lake, the boy found her and carried her and something wrapped up to the surface
this would be his reward
This!
She was lost and Why?! was all he could think
so he gritted his teeth and choked back tears and opened the wrapping to find
Excalibur, the Blue Blade, born of Fire and Water, Death and Tears
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Re: Lady of the Lake By Divine Metamorphoses
« Reply #41 on: April 19, 2015, 11:24:34 pm »
Everyone should take note of the fantastic poetry created and displayed by Divine! She is a real jewel in the poetry community! :) :)
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Re: Lady of the Lake By Divine Metamorphoses
« Reply #42 on: April 21, 2015, 03:52:57 am »
Wow
Yes I think I need to get off the phone I am sorry I missed all of this!
Lady Misty & Lady TT I love that image as well! Come to think of it the female form is represented by Lady Lace as her Avi in this forum

Vampire Creepy I see I have some creations to respond to will do so soon

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Re: Lady of the Lake By Divine Metamorphoses
« Reply #43 on: April 21, 2015, 03:56:55 am »
Continuation for I got kicked out haha

Sir Keenan I would like to also respond to your great creation of that is great with you.

Vampire Creepy as always Wow

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Poetic you're so kind! Can't wait to read your creations. Glad you're all here and we are all family at Camelot thanks to the benevolent & kind General Clay Death

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Re: Lady of the Lake By Divine Metamorphoses
« Reply #44 on: April 22, 2015, 12:45:44 am »
Thank you so much.  You are all wonderful.  I'm having fun, and getting my creative energies percolating.  :)
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